Can anyone give me some constructive criticism /advice on how I can make this coding neater, better, etc?

Question

Looking for some constructive criticism
https://code.sololearn.com/cpB1WfW83GAI/?ref=app

Answer 1

hey! i actually had a fun time with your code and ascii art(: I got a bit carried away with refactoring, but take a look and let me know if you have any questions and feel free to use whatever!
https://code.sololearn.com/c1AH6J5jp71M/?ref=app

Answer 2

Go to the code I made in the comments and we’ll talk there!

Answer 3

Nice graphics!
You may check my code to get some ideas. I have put comments for understanding.
My goal was to create one variable for all dices and call them by index. The evaluation of the result is also acquired from a dictionary.

https://code.sololearn.com/c0YpUrgIYvtk/?ref=app

Answer 4

Thanks Nathan Lewis! That's exactly what I was trying to get out of my head... I knew I could have used a list some how, instead of that grossly, messy, "if", "elif", etc..

But I couldn't get any thing out.. I'd just finished a 9 straight hour construction shift, with lots of walking (up and down stairs).. So I was mentally (and physically) beat.

I still can't make sense of what you did.. But, I know what you did...

Did that make sense?

Answer 5

Hey Nathan Lewis, can you take a look at my code again. I remember what I was trying to do, and why I was having problems with the list.

I updated my code and would love to see your take on it.